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I need to share these bits from an undergrad paper I'm marking. Both excerpts are from the same paragraph (and I use "paragraph" in the most generous of ways):
"Sometimes the audience did not respond well to certain movies because it was overly funny for the immigrants at the time."
...and
"Similarly, when trying to film a western movies, you required cowboy looking men. Therefore genres helped the production companies who only filmed werstern [sic] films to hire these cowboy looking men."
"Sometimes the audience did not respond well to certain movies because it was overly funny for the immigrants at the time."
...and
"Similarly, when trying to film a western movies, you required cowboy looking men. Therefore genres helped the production companies who only filmed werstern [sic] films to hire these cowboy looking men."
